Homeless man alone
Sleeping rough under train bridge
Sad, lost, unloved
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Phil lister 21/08/17
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Homelessness haiku
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I would have loved it if there was some metaphor in it. It creates an image but it doesn’t make me think. I can’t do haiku as it requires writing words exactly as they have to be written.
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Thanks for your comment, glad it made you think even if you didn’t love it. Always happy to have the critics even if negative.
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