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Gazing at the stars lighting up the sky
Pondering the distance between us
Seeming endlessness, moments lost
Silence painful and yet painless
Reminiscent of your voice
Your words caress my thoughts
Echoing with your twang
Our happiness trumped the world
An unbreakable bond
Shattered into a million pieces
Impossible to reassemble
Hands out stretching
Our reach unforgiving
Clasping at nothingness
You float away into eternity
My heart expired with yours
Memories dwindling but remain
Knowing that we’ll reunite
I’ll stare until I slumber
And dream of you by my side
The stars so bright this night
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Oh I love this!
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Thank you tara, nice to see you changed the photo again, and thank you again for your previous reviews and your future review, happy to know I can count on you my friend.
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I wish youโd read another poem live again. (Video) That was really great. I sincerely enjoyed it.
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Maybe I will ๐
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Ps I corrected your name
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Hahaha! I assumed autocorrect was to blame ๐๐
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We’ll leave it at that, I’m terrible for names but I know yours, kicking my ass
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Hahaha!! That made me laugh!
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Was it the photo change? Should I go back to the Caribou??? Throw you off? LOL
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Ha ha, can’t understand why you’d think that.
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It was just a joke. Messing with you.
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I know
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Okay, just wanted to be sure you knew. โบ๏ธ
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This is an amazing piece of writing! It’s simply beautiful… I love it.
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Thank you sherell, my confidence has really taken a battering this last week with some reviews and I have been asking questions of myself and my writing. I know as a writer you will have to take the negative and positive reviews but it’s people like you and tara that make me want to continue. I consider this a special piece and I’m currently looking at poetry writing methods to expand my genre or to improve what I write. Thank you for your kind words.
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De rien ๐ I have always enjoyed your work and this piece especially is beautifully written
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And btw… don’t let those negative reviews get to you… not everyone has the same taste… as we say in Trinidad “If yuh doh like doh come back” ๐ You don’t need readers like that anyway
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