Out for the evening 19 years old
What story has the night to be told?
Into the club, a Smirnoff or two
On the dance floor and I see you
Your looking at me, really at me?
What is gonna happen? To be?
We dance together, grind to the beat
I can’t stop dancing, nor control my feet
You look in my eyes for a second or two
Then we kiss passionately, me and you
We cannot wait, we grab our coats
Catch a cab, this is not a joke
Back to mine, through the door
Knickers off, to the floor
You rip my shirt, I rip yours off too
Wild animals in an explosive stew
On my old sofa bed, with broken springs
Dont care, making you scream
Alcohol great, it’s lasting long
Oh it’s great, nothing wrong
Then to the climax, at the same time
Oh it was great, hearing you whine
We finish, panting, laying there nude
Strangers, that had fun, being rude!
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Sounds like a really great time 😍
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It was rather fun, long time ago though, true story, have another one that I was thinking about, maybe if I fancy it, thanks for the inspiration
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My pleasure! Write about someone you really care(or cared) about, but the first time you met them. And how things are different
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Can only be my gf now, she’s already got 1 or 2 poems, but that’s a good inspiration too,
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woah!
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Well, that was unexpected.
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Sounds like a really outstanding prison term 😍
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Wonderful
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I think the writer is actively and intentionally hiding the gender of the persona here: I can’t find any express pointer as to the persona’s gender but I think it sounds like a girl you the actions that I think a girl would do.
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True story from guys point of view
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Pleasure seeking stranger!!
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I love this. Such raw passion. Your work is inspiring.
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Glad you like it, so nice to hear, I have written many erotic poems on my WordPress, check them out. Keep reading, thank you
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This is awesome. Thanks for sharing!
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Glad you liked
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