The stench of them, escapees, days it has been
In the boat, it’s horrific scenes
Piss, sweat, blood and tears
Silence wearily breeding fear
Little water, no food left
Weak pushed overboard, laid to rest
They’ve paid their money to board the boat
It’s a wonder it has stayed afloat
Coming up to land, they see it there
They start to overcome their despair
“Out of the boat” someone cries
Pushed into the water by the other guys
Winded, swallowing water now
You are submerged, pushed down, and how
You try to fight with others around you
All of you battling to breathe too
You hear shouting, just muffled sounds
You feel other people’s bodies all around
You come to the surface and catch your breath
It seems like you have passed the test
You look around in the water near you
Drowned bodies in a sea of death stew
This is the freedom you have seeked
Only for the strong, not the weak
You swim for the shore, as hard as you can
What will you do? What will be your plan?
It’s still so far, so far away
Will you reach it? Get there today?
You push and push, more and more
You start to touch the sea floor
Exhausted, emotional, you reach the land
You feel the ground, the wet sand
You start to cry, you’re an emotional mess
To survive all that, you must have been blessed
Poem taking directly from my book “Rhyming poetry to change your day” I hope yours is good, come what may.
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WOW! It’s such an intense and powerful poem. ❤👌🏻
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Thank you, I love this piece
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Me too Philip! ❤
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This is amazing and by amazing I mean the type of poetry that should be written and read 💜
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Thank you, this comment made my day. By far one of my favourite works.
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